The Importance Of "Correct Punctuation"

*Version One*

Dear John:

I want a man who knows what love is all about.  You are generous, kind,

thoughtful.  People who are not like you admit to being useless and

inferior.  You have ruined me for other men.  I yearn for you.  I have no

feelings whatsoever when we're apart.  I can be forever happy--will you let

me be yours?  Jane

*Version Two*

Dear John:

I want a man who knows what love is.  All about you are generous, kind,

thoughtful people, who are not like you.  Admit to being useless and

inferior.  You have ruined me.  For other men, I yearn.  For you, I have no

feelings whatsoever.  When we're apart, I can be forever happy.  Will you

let me be?

Yours, Jane